
A small light brown pup hurtled into the camp, wide-eyed and panting. He looked around, startled by all of the dogs around, but he need their help. He ran up to a black dog, Blaze, and stammered, "Help! My sister is hurt, please help us!" Blaze looked down at the young pup. He crouched down to be at eye level with him.
"Hi, young one, who are you? I don't recognize you." He didn't take the pup's desperate cries seriously at all.
"My name is Frock, and my sister, Surry, fell! She's stuck down there and I can't get her down without falling myself! Will you help us?" He kept glancing back, as though making sure Surry weren't going to sudenly appear out of the forest. Blaze realized Frock really meant what he was saying. He stood up.
"Let me go talk to my leader, Spark. ome with me." He quickly trotted over to Spark, who was eating a piece of deer with Ember. She looked up when Blaze arrived with Frock scrambling along beind him.
"Who is this, Blaze?" She asked, swallowing a mouthfull of deer meat and standing up.
"This is Frock, he just came. He says his sister Sully fell and is stuck somewhere."
"Surry! Frock corrected him impatiently. He was hopping around on his toes. "Quick, can you help me get her out?" Spark immediately burst into action.
"Yes, where is she? What did she fall into?" she demanded.
"A ravine I think," he answered. "Follow me!" He turned and started running back the way he came.
"Whoa Frock, let me gather my pack first. Spark then juped up onto the High Stone and howled. He pack gathered before her. "This young pup here just arrived, telling me that his sister has fallen an is stuck. We cannot ignored a pup in need, so I want Kisharu, Moona, Echo, Blaze, Star, and Leo to come with me. We never know what we'll find. Let's go!" She jumped off the High Stone and jogged to where Frock was. He quickly turned and once again made for the trees, the dogs following him.
Echo hung back, following behind last. He had a familiar feeing about Frock. Almost as though...no, it couldn't be. He slowed even further, letting the dogs ahead of him slip out of sight. There was something fishy going on here, and he had to find out what.
(If you were chosen to go, comment on how you get Surry out of the narrow ravine. Surry is the black pup, Frock is brown. Bring Surry and Frock back to camp, please.)
Star raced to the ravine. Surry's black fur was visible below. "Help!", she cried. Star peered down at her. "It looks like we can pull her up if she grabs hold of this log", she said.
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Blaze nodded, gazing down at Surry. He took the log in his strong jaws and lowered it. It came short about a tail's length away from the pup. "Find a longer log! He cried, pulling that one back up.
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"No! I can't even hold onto a log like that! It won't work on a pup!" she thought pacing around "Lower me into the revine!" she said already lowering herself into the ravnie. "Blaze! Hold my scruff...not hard! Ow!" she scquirmed around as he bit into her scuff "Lower, Lower! When I get in Ill hand the pup up to you" she explained
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ReplyDeleteLeo helped get the pup out, he hated to seee others in distress.
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can you change the poll.... I wanted Cleo or Leo to be deputy)
Uuum, which one? Cleo or Leo...I think I'll have to start the poll over again, let me check..
ReplyDeleteI'd have to make a whole new poll :( I guess I can if you REALLY wanted me to?
ReplyDeleteBlaze lowered Star slowly into the ravine, straining under her weight, while still trying to hold her gently. He fekt his paw slip, and stepped back a little. "Can you reach her?" he said tensly, through clenched teeth. He couldn't see past her. How had this dog gotten down there anyway?
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Frock paced back and forth along the cliff edge, glncing at Blaze and the other black dog that he didn't know. He was impatient. What if Surry never got free? Their leader, Spark, wouldn't let him any closer to the edge, so he wouldn't fall in himself. He turned away from the ravine and spotted a black, white, and brown wolf, sitting quietly and watching the scene play out before him. Why isn't he helping? he thought, annoyed. He turned back again, and came face-to-face with Spark.
~Frock
Spark stepped behind the pup, Frock, just as he turned back around, startling him. "Hello," she said. "We haven't had a chance to properly talk yet. I'm Spark, leader of ThunderPack. Where are you from?" she asked.
"I'm Frock, from...er...I don't really belong to a pack I guess," he said slowly. Carefully, even,
Spark thought before responding. "How did your sister fall down there, anyway?"
"I TOLD her not to go close, but she never listens to me. She wanted to see what was down there, and then she slipped, and couldn't stop herself from falling. I couldn't reach her." He looked downcast again, and stared nervously at the dogs crowded around the edge of the ravine.
"Where were you going, though?" Spark prompted.
Frock fidgeted under her sharp gaze. He didn't like being questioned this closely.
"Er, well-" but he was cut off by a yelp from Star, as Blaze's left front paw slipped over the edge. Spark was there in a flash, and hoisted him back up. Frock's anxieties resurfaced, and he rushed over, not caring if he was in danger.
~Frock
Echo watched quietly from the trees. There was something bout the pups...he just couldn't place it. And he was jittery, like he had been when he was on the run. As though eyes were watching him from behing, but when he turned to look, they were-gone. He shifted his weight nervously, glancing all around occasionally.
~Echo
ReplyDeleteWell kind of... But now if you don't want too
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OK , OK I changed it.
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Star looked down at the frightened pup. "Ok", she said, "On three, I am going to pull you up. Ready? One, two, THREE!"
ReplyDeleteto be continued..........
~Star
(???? ARE WE DOING THE LOG THING OR THE ME GO DOWN INTO THE RAVNIE THING?)
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(opps sorry for the caps! -_-)
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(I don't know! You can try both if you want it doesn't really matter as long as Surry gets up and Frock doesn't fall in haha)
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I have a good idea about the deputyship! Once it's down to two wolves, and one wolf wins, I think the other should be made head warrior. That way, they get to be second in command (apart from the top dog), and earn something for being a runners-up! What do you think?
ReplyDelete[Oh I thought someone was lowering ME over the edge!]
ReplyDelete~Star
(I thought it was me!??? Whice one do you wanna do?)
ReplyDeleteOK Catlover that sounds like a good idea(: It looks like it's between Kisharu and Ice!
ReplyDelete(I don't really care as long as Surry gets out and Frock doesn't fall in! And hurry, it's getting colder!)
(Okay...well lower me into the ravine please!)
ReplyDelete"Okay! Lower me into the ravine! Hurry!" she shivered "Ill give her to you, Star, when I get down. When im down...I think I could claw me way back up..." she shuffeled her paws but lowered her bottem into the ravine using pawhold in the rocks.
~Kisharu
(OK everybody, I'm going skiing this weekened(: But I realize the deputy poll is over tomorrow!! And I'm leaving right after school to drive there...So I'm kind of seriously upset that I won't be able to announce the winner and runner-up...
ReplyDeleteBut here is how it's going to work. Obviously the winner will be deputy. But the runner-up will be head warrior!
And when I get back I'll also post some information on Frock and Surry, thanks to all my warriors who are saving them!
I might post again later, but if not, goodbye until next...Monday? Maybe Sunday night?
That is, if I don't injure myself skiing...)
~Dust
Blaze looked anxiously at Kisharu lowering herself over the edge. He whined, scared she might fall, but there was nothing he could do; she was already surrounded by his comrades. He heard Surry yelp in fright below and his heart almost stopped. That poor pup!
~Blaze
She fell the next couple of inches and landed on a sharp stone. "Arr!" she whinded and scambeled up. "Pup?" she said searching in her mind for the name "Sully? Sunny? Summy?" she called out into the ravine searching for the black pup.
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(Awww! Kewl! Good luck and dont fall off a mountain!)
"Help! Help!" Came a small voice a little ways up. "It's Sully, help! My paw is stuck!" she whined, wincing as she once again tried to pull free.
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(gee thanks(: )
"Hurry.", Star grunted. "I can't swing here all day!"
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"Okay okay hold on!" she bounded up a couple of rocks a reached for her paw "Stay still" she warned and took a gentle hold of her paw with her mouth and pulled. It came out easily and she held onto the puppies scruff "Okay pull us out!" she screatched up high.
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(Dont mention it ;))
"You're too heavy to take all at once.", Star grunted. "I'll take Surry first." She leaned down and grabbed the pup by the scruff of her neck. "Pull!", she yelled. Slowly, the dogs pulled Star and Surry onto firm ground. Star checked to see if Surry was alright, before cautiously sliding down the slope toward Kisharu.
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"Be careful!" she barked when she reached a slippery part.
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Star slid down the slope toward Kisharu. She grabbed hold of her scruff. "On three!", she said through Kisharu's fur. "One, two, three!"
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